I just revamped the landing page for a product I created a while back and would love some feedback.
Check it out at https://tutorbook.app (note that we're using custom HTML Web Components so if you see a blank page it's because your browser doesn't support them).
Do you understand what our product is? What we're offering? Do you know who are user base is? Do you know who we're marketing to?
Any feedback would be great; the meaner the better.
The design looks just like Intercom (https://www.intercom.com).
I'd roast you, but how do I know you're not just a copy of the real "Nicholas Chiang"?
Was this your homework? Looks like plagiarism to me and no citing of sources.
wow. this is a nasty comment.
🤷🏻♂️
Wow, that's nasty, it's copied without any changes.
Wrong haha, I changed the "electric teal" colors to Tutorbook's purple.
Couple of things..
Hope that's helpful! :)
Thanks, yeah, super helpful! It's definitely on Tutorbook's Roadmap to add more individual landing pages (i.e. one for each use case and feature listed in that footer).
Our target with this page isn't for teachers. We're trying to sell to school or school district administrators (e.g. the Assistant Principal in charge of Student Support Services). Though I will definitely look into running the copy-writing by some of those admins at our existing schools to see what they think.
Eventually, that "See why" button should open up a product page describing exactly what Tutorbook is (i.e. our primary landing page describes what you can do with Tutorbook and then that page would describe what Tutorbook is).
As for SEO, I haven't even started to think about that haha. Another thing to add to our Roadmap!
And yes, we are in the process of creating some testimonial videos that'll be added to the site soon (along with a "Customers" page showcasing the schools that are already in love with the app).
Cool - yes I'd try and plan SEO and marketing before launch, that's something I wish I'd done more of!
All the best with it :)
Haha you asked for it...
Looks pretty good. Could use better alignment on some of the screens.
One big thing missing: Social proof. Do any schools like this product? Any think it's a good idea? Any teachers? Administrators? Without their words and faces it seems like it's missing something...
Right, I definitely agree! We are in the process of creating some testimonial videos that'll be added to the site soon (along with a "Customers" page showcasing the schools that are already in love with the app).
But what do you mean by better alignment? Could you send me screenshots as to what's wrong there?
Awesome, that's great.
Just some little things: