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Roast my book's product page - I'll roast yours back (if you want)
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Onemorething
https://gumroad.com/l/codeforhumans
Didn't saw the price in gum road until I click I want this. Is this unusual?
bye the way if you could give a feedback on my post it will be great
I'm a dev, so not the target market, but I am mostly intrigued by the contents of the book.
I wonder if you could make your opening paragraph more punchy and more direct with the value proposition. Something like:
This is great copy! I implemented a lot of it, thanks for the feedback! And actually, non-devs are the target market, so I'm glad you were at least intrigued :)
You're welcome - happy to take another look whenever you'd like!
I think you misread my comment, I'm actually a dev 😀
One quick thought: do non-devs know what Swift is? Maybe the 'create iPhone apps' should have higher priority than 'learn Swift' value proposition.
Wouldn't you bold the "think like a programmer" vs the terms your audience might not know?
The header image for me feels like wasting a lot of space that could be used to deliver a message
I took your advice on bolding selling points instead of terms, thank you! And I'm definitely going to have to put some thought into the header image