I am just working on improving my competitor comparison page and want to hear your feedback on what you think about it.
Too wordy? Too detailed? Not informative?
Thanks in advance!
Thanks for the feedback! Totally agree with all of the above, I’ve reduce the number of words dramatically 😁 and made the information easier to absorb.
Hey Donald,
A couple of suggestions from someone who is both a current product marketer and former designer:
Of course, you could always ship it then your software to optimize 😉
Thanks for the feedback!! It is really insightful, especially for the 3rd point, to increase legibility just like that.
The headline is not precise enough. Powerful can mean everything, and for the "affordable" I'd give specific numbers (ex: 32%) in this case to add more impact to your message.
Since it's not an advantage I wouldn't really put it there
Hi Donald,
Your design really needs some white space between each section.
Users need time to think before moving to the next section.
Cheers
Thanks for the feedback much appreciated!
Anyway, I will probably do A/B testing on our designs to see if it actually increases our conversion rate, as a fun experiment!