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Roast My Landing Page

Just recently finished my MVP for a Giveaway creation platform. However, having issues getting users to sign up. Feedback would be tremendously helpful.

DashGain.com

on September 15, 2020
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    • Personally I would avoid the sound, even if it's from a feedback widget
    • The picture looks a lot like a trading card, is that intentional?
    • "Drive traffic..." is your offer providing traffic?
    • It's not clear visually what your service does, it looks like it just creates this card thingy.
    • The texts on that card is really small and hard to read..
    • The card doesn't look interesting/appealing for someone to actually focus on..
    • What does it mean for me to have 0 or more entries?... like I can guess from other context what you'r doing, but your not making it clear and easy.. What do I get? what does the user get? how does the user interact? what does the user do? what is the user's motivation? is it always the same static set of actions and points as on the card or is it customisable? it just all feels a bit like blah, boring.. how do you build excitement? why should I care about it?... the page just does't communicate the value for either party, the owner or the user

    This for example gives reasons on why to do something like that
    https://sproutsocial.com/insights/social-media-contests/
    http://blog.hellosocial.com.au/blog/social-media-competition-ideas (more gist)

    #4 here has like a ready good picture example that has energy to it..
    https://blog.wishpond.com/post/115675437375/social-media-giveaway-ideas

    maybe look at some similar offers for inspiration
    https://bloggingwizard.com/social-media-contest-tools/

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      I really appreciate the feedback and the links! You're right the value is not clear to the potential user.