Roast my landing page 🙏

Hi Filip!

Added 6-7 things I think that can be improved, mostly on the copy.
Here they are - https://visualdebug.com/show/stakeholders.onetone.ai

The design is nice. The content is not clear enough for me, though. I am not sure exactly how your tool works, just comes with a promise and no actual explanation of what it does. The Bill Gates quote at the end makes the page looks like a premade template or scam.

Hi Filip! A few comments on your landing page:

• Do you have a stronger call to action than "Learn more"? Maybe "book a demo" should be at this place?
• That's a lot of text in different colors and fonts in your top section. I would remove "Our mission is to assist CEOs and Founders", it's not saying anything especially useful. "127+ leaders are actively preventing customer loss" is already doing a good job at showing who the target audience is
• Highlight the benefits you're delivering rather than the pains you're addressing. E.g. Set 'Gain insights' in bold instead of 'losing customers'
• "where your company is losing customers" sounds very generic. From what I understand about your product it's more specifically targeted at written communications that are not getting engagement, right?

Footer text looks weird when centered like this.

I have no idea how exactly would your product help me reduce customer loss, except the "AI powered" part in the footer.

I understand "what?" ("Stop Losing Your Customers!"), but I am not able to understand "how?". The site shows possible integrations, but I would love to see a point close to the top about how it works and what is the requirement.

My suggestion would be adding something along the lines "Stop losing your customers with our insight based on data from your CRM."

I'll keep my fingers crossed for your project!

Hey Filip! What particular audience/segment are you targeting or building this for? To me the value proposition feels too broad causing me to not really understand what you're solving. Do you help me retain more people in my checkout flow for my eCom business? Do you help me reduce churn as a SaaS business?

Hone in on the particular segment you first focus on (start niche) and adjust your value proposition (and product potentially) accordingly.