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Roast my landing page π
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Filip Balada
https://stakeholders.onetone.ai/
Hi Filip!
Added 6-7 things I think that can be improved, mostly on the copy.
Here they are - https://visualdebug.com/show/stakeholders.onetone.ai
Hi Stan,
Thank you for taking the time to review the page. I really appreciate it. I am currently considering your suggestion and will take it into account.
Thanks again!
The design is nice. The content is not clear enough for me, though. I am not sure exactly how your tool works, just comes with a promise and no actual explanation of what it does. The Bill Gates quote at the end makes the page looks like a premade template or scam.
Hi, thank you for your comment. I've tried to explain the problem β how communication mistakes can lead to customer loss. I will consider to describe product features in more detail. :)
Hi Filip! A few comments on your landing page:
Footer text looks weird when centered like this.
I have no idea how exactly would your product help me reduce customer loss, except the "AI powered" part in the footer.
Hey Filip! What particular audience/segment are you targeting or building this for? To me the value proposition feels too broad causing me to not really understand what you're solving. Do you help me retain more people in my checkout flow for my eCom business? Do you help me reduce churn as a SaaS business?
Hone in on the particular segment you first focus on (start niche) and adjust your value proposition (and product potentially) accordingly.
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