Roast My Landing Page

Hi Roses! Here are a few pieces of feedback on your website:

• You need to add a favicon
• It's a lot to load into your face at once but then there's not much content
• You need to focus your main tagline. I think it can be "Connect with 200+ small clothing manufacturers globally." Make it the main text, bigger and bold. The you can have sub text if necessary
• IDK what "yes seriously" adds but it almost seems confrontational? I think you can just remove that
• more spacing between your top of the page (the hero) and the images/content. It's all jammed together right now
• you need some kind of footer, even a simple copyright date and email or something would be nice
• I also think you need at least one more section. Maybe explaining how it works, or the value you provide, or you as a founder/team member, or something else. Right now it seems a little too simple

If you liked my feedback I'd love yours on my website!
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/compare-my-v1-to-my-v5-and-then-give-me-feedback-so-i-can-make-v6-2026f3fb09

Thanks! 🙏

Maybe is my fault, but I didn't get straightaway the purpose of the page. And I'm not sure I have it now.

The pictures don't help the message.

Do you want to get the emails of potential leads? Then highlight much much more the CTA.

And make easier the subscription process. I doubt people answer to a Google Form without knowing you.