Roast my landing page, I'll roast yours
I'd like to get some feedback on my landing page, and in exchange, I'll give you mine about yours. I am curious about your opinion both from a customer and from a fellow indie hacker point of view. Thanks!
Here it is: https://prefund.app
Hi Gábor!
This is the kind of service I sometimes think about using. In fact I used something for quite a while (until it was sold and killed by the dev).
My first question would be: Is this integrated with my bank account (because I'm not gonna fill in all of this by hand), my second question would be: Is my data safe?
The third question that bubbles up when I am reading it is: Is this a personal expense tracker of is it aimed at businesses/projects/etc? The name says the latter, the example says the former.
Lastly about the layout and the message: Personally I think it is a bit crowded on the page. I think you are selling peace of mind, but I get a spreadsheet vibe of the design. For instance, I would take your screenshot and place that in a phone, or maybe swap it out for a stock photo. The big text (the promise) could be geared more for the outcome (Financial peace of mind), you could put the current promise in the alinea under it (the explanation)
Hope it helps!
PS, This is mine, would love feedback: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-me-searching-your-messages-1e4dbbdc3f
Thank you for your valuable feedback, I took notes and I am going to target those points in the next iteration. I'll now look at your product :)