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Roast my SaaS Landing Page

Hey everyone!

I hope you're having a great day. I'm super excited to share my latest SaaS project with you all and would love to hear what you think of its landing page. First impressions are everything and I want to make sure I'm putting my best foot forward.

Thanks!

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Landing Page Feedback
on January 31, 2023
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    Hey Idan, great job on your landing page! I must admit I don't know much about the CS:GO skin trading market 😅, but I left you some feedback on your landing page on this video: https://app.fraem.io/watch/798b49db-2632-48c0-bc56-98a85fa10b7a.

    Let me know if helpful 🚀,

    Lorenzo from fraem.io

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      Thank you so much for this amazing feedback! 🤩
      It was indeed very helpful (:

      Fraem looks awesome! I wish you the best of luck with it.

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        Thanks 🙏. There is still a bit to build before we can have an MVP ready for primetime, but we are looking forward collecting early interest and feedback 💪

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    I think the side margins are too low. Try targeting for 48px atleast.

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    Hi! I really like your design of this landing page, which looks so good! The only thing I'd like to tell is that all of the screenshots can be larger so the audience can see your product clearly!

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    Howdy @idanmasas,

    TL;DR ⭐️

    1. Good start!
    2. Needs better, more powerful Headlines.
    3. Needs better screenshots.

    BREAKDOWN 🎯

    1. Clarity
    Currently, I'm not certain whether this is a trading platform where transactions happen, or if this is an analytics-type aggregator. Leaning toward the latter but I'm not certain.

    2. Headlines
    The simple structure of the page is great. Users basically read the headlines one after the other and that tells a story.

    All headlines need to be rewritten to be succinct and punchier

    • CS:GO skin trading for Pros
    • All-in-one trading platform
    • More money, less risk
    • Smart, safe trading

    3. Address the Problems

    • Need to address the problems that traders have experienced
    • Theft, hacks, mistakes, etc
    • Then show how SkinScout can solve those problems

    4. Social Proof
    Need to gather testimonials and ratings as-soon-as-possible.

    5. CTA
    A better primary CTA button would be "Get early access"

    6. Screenshots

    • We want more screenshots! The app design looks good, give us more!!
    • Show zoomed-in screenshots

    7. Questions

    • Potential questions and issues should be addressed with an FAQ section.

    COMPARABLES ⚖️

    SkinScout reminded me of a recent NFT marketplace that came out and made a huge splash. Check it
    Blur.io. NFT Marketplace for Pro Traders.

    DO THIS, I DARE YOU 🫵

    You should add your LP to this new post I just dropped:
    I will redesign 1 landing page live for free

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      Thank you so much, Calebsylvest!

      This was a great feedback, and I agree with anything that you said, haha🤣

      Thanks again (:

  5. 1

    Hey Idan, Your landing page is good :)

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