This is the page: https://recomind.io
Feel free to leave a link to your page and I'll take a look
The message is clear, but there is no social proof. For example:
"Increase Click-Through Rate Between 50% and 300% in CTR driven by recommendations"
Who says that? It should be some real retailer who partnered with you. There should be a photo, real name and position. I should believe it's a real person
p.s. flying background makes reading your benefits a really painful experience.
You're welcome to roast my LP: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/landing-page-roast-will-fire-yours-back-b32bf4ba7a
Thanks, in some cases unfortunately we don't have an agreement to disclose the names of our customers publicly, that's why not all of them are named.
There has been several feedbacks around the background in the same direction :-)
I think you have an interesting product, but you should definitely work on your website.
What I like:
I hope that helped! :)
@patrickr thanks for your detailed feedback. Of all of it, the one that really worries me is it took me some time to get what you actually are doing.
it took me some time to get what you actually are doing
Of the headline: "We increase your conversion with AI Recommendations", is it not clear who is the customer or is it not straightforward what recommendations are?
Another headlines we are experimenting are (maybe too long?):
What do you think?
The first two suggestions go in the right direction.
I recommend you to read this article:
I love the idea, but have a few tips for the LP:
The section with the blue background and the girl should be changed. The Background is too complicated, it's not easy to read the advantages. Also the girl is looking a bit strange just flying there.
Remove the shaddows from the buttons (or change them).
You are using like 3-4 diferent fonts, try to use only 2.
Overall the whole feeling of the landing page is "cheap" for me. A couple small changes might help a lot (check lapa.ninja or landingfolio, they have great design ideas for SaaS).
thanks for your feedback, I'll iterate over your ideas.
I think the most important question for me is did you get the message and what is the benefit for the customer?
Thanks for the feedback. I haven't noticed that the page was white initially. We'll do some tests thanks.
About the shoes, I was thinking of creating an animation, any suggestion?
Content wise, idk. Technology wise:
I used Flare animations for an open source project (Flutter clock contest).
I think they're called Rive now. You can embed them pretty easily into apps, I guess it's similar for websites.
Here's the GitHub with a demo video:
https://rive.app/ looks really promising. Thanks for the advice!
Really nice feedback, I'll iterate over your ideas. A thousand thanks
hi Rcm, i have some tough news to deliver: i was confused! here are my thoughts:
I'm currently running an AB testing with Google optimize to check to variations of the page