Roast our landing page revamp

Hi!
Looks fancy, great stuff!
Value proposition looks a bit vague in the beginning of the page - "manage financing", "optimize the funding type" etc is too broad to stick immediately to what you are proposing. However it become more clear in the section "Enhance your funding experience".
What do you think about raising it higher or creating a similar section with specifics?
And did you conduct UX interviews with your potential customers to know what they really think of it?
Good luck with your product!

I'm not sure what "Power your funding story" means. I think you wanted to somehow connect the headline to a product name.

"Manage every stage of start-up financing" is a statement, not a benefit. Not sure what I'm getting here. If the headline was "Manage every sage of your start-up financing at one place", then I guess it makes sense.

I found the 3 features under "Enhance your funding experience" to give me a clearer idea of what this software is all about. Things like "Visualize how close you are to your funding target.".

Targeting was good I can relate:

Pre-funding (ok i'm in)
Perfect for businesses preparing for financing (a bit redundant but ok)
Optimize for the right funding type (eh? what is funding type?)

But what's next? How do you help me optimizing? Event when I click on this tab you just show some generic screenshot.

So out of curiosity I signed in. Some panes, bunch of dashboards, but where is the action? Show me success path. You customer in funding phase, so is very very motivated. To watch a video, even to read a long copy. But not to find a way how you think your tool can help. It's too much to ask from user.

Show clearly how you can help entrepreneurs.