Hey hey, y'all.
Would love your feedback on this landing page. If you're not an agency owner or in the web design world you may not be super familiar with the terms SOW or Scope of Work (though most of you probably do).
We also just put together a little explainer video but im not sure how effective it is. Looking forward to your feedback
Nice idea! For feedback on the lander: I don't love the font for the H1. The vertical height gives me a weird feeling, but that may just be me.
Having worked at an agency and as a freelancer I can see the utility here. From a freelancer point of view I would prefer a one-time pricing with an annual subscription price that made it a no-brainer if you are booking more than say 5 projects a year.
From an agency pov I would emphasize that you act like an extra employee or team that they don't have to hire (but that they can bill for!) then price based on that so the saving is obvious.
I would add a blog section and start posting helpful articles as I bet you'd get a ton of traffic from content marketing. Talking about SOW checklists etc. things not to forget, horror stories etc. things that will pull in people that need this service to your site.
Other than that it looks good. The only nitpick I could think of is that the middle section is a little busy. I would have the video up top then use screenshots or not-auto-playing-video later on so you can direct attention and not have it feel too active.
Best of luck with it.
Thanks so much for this, very helpful. It seems you are not the only one who doesnt like the H1 haha.
One-time pricing is actually an excellent idea. I like it for a few reasons:
Content / Blog: Excellent idea. One of those things that I have not had the time to do yet with my full time agency job.
Moving Screenshots: Interesting, I get your point, feels a little too active.
Thanks so much for all of this
If you have time I'd love your thoughts on my landing page: https://timecheck.us thanks! And upvote if poss :) https://www.indiehackers.com/post/launched-in-beta-timecheck-an-app-for-imessage-that-compares-the-availability-of-everyone-in-a-group-chat-to-find-times-when-all-are-free-4d22721cdd
Done!
Interesting idea @shane_098, Congratulations!
Some observations:
Hope it helps!
Please feel free to DM me on Twitter (notifykamalraj) if you need any clarification. I can take a look at your app and future versions of the website and give you feedback as well. Hope we can add value to each other as makers!
Thank you!
Good points.
Your H1 font looks weird to me anyway:
Are those buttons below the H1? I tried to click them but they didnt work...
Why isn't the video above the fold? I would move it up
Additionally:
"ScopeConcierge’s automatic scope generator is currently designed for website, branding and design projects. "
I would move this out of the FAQ and clearly more at the top of the page since this was the first question I asked after watching your video
Love it. Thank you