Second Stab: Landing page critique
Hi guys,
I guess im rather slow. I've finally got a reasonably good looking (to me) landing page and got the product working reliably.
I wanted to ask this community - can you understand the product and offer? how should we improve the landing page? does the product resonate with you?
(i think it's now much better than my last post - https://www.indiehackers.com/post/fastmonitor-getting-ready-to-launch-but-users-cant-understand-what-do-you-want-to-know-about-site-speed-ce1e841bd6)
Thanks!
Whatsapp icon is too big IMHO
The headline can be more positive than the current one. "Stop wasting traffic" feels generic and doesn't exactly tell me what the product does.
Thanks @yashpoojary
it says
"Stop Wasting Traffic!
• Improve ROAS
• Increase conversion
• Reduce bounce
with Continuous Performance Monitoring & Improvement"
What i was trying to achieve:
"oh crap i better get this now"
and from an ecommerce founder perspective, they are buying a ton of traffic, so if that traffic bounces due to a slow site, they're losing money. (check this out - https://thedecisionlab.com/biases/loss-aversion)
but how would use phrase it? any suggestions?
Maybe
with Continuous Performance Monitoring & Improvement needs to be worked on?
I would go with something along the lines of:
Drive Revenue, Not Bounce Rates
You don't like to wait? So why should your customers
Hey i like that a lot. thanks Yash.
Will take it as a starting off point for next brainstorm :-)
It's clear, relatively clean, GJ