URL: https://premiumpokertools.com/
Some comments:
- A social proof section will be coming soon!
- I thought that the best way to 1) describe what my app does and 2) show people why it's cool would be with with quiz questions. I also would think that they'd be a good way to grab people with short attention spans.
- It's sort of hard for me to have a traditional features section. The features are relatively complex and I thought would be better explained via the video playlists, as opposed to trying to describe them via text and images.
- Having a traditional header and subheader explaining what the app does and why it's cool didn't really seem appropriate. For one, what it does is in the name (poker tools).
- I'm not sure whether or not I should keep the section saying that poker coaches would all say that you need software study poker. I thought it'd give people a nice push. And I did the thing where you have a separate link for each word to kind of imply some sort of social proof that I'm not making it up.
- I'm curious to hear what you guys think of the section that helps you estimate how much money the app might make you. I feel like it'd give people a nice push, but one person told me that she found if offputting.
- I know it could be much better from a visual design perspective. I don't quite have those skills myself. I plan on paying someone who does have those skills to help me with the landing page once I have some more money.
Thanks guys!
In a word. Intimidating.
Immediately gave me flash backs of high school exams I wasn't prepared for.
I actually don't hate the concept, but I think the implementation is a bit.... terrifying. I'd perhaps do a big call to action along the lines of "Think you know poker?" or something that would quickly tug at somebody's ego to want to prove themselves.
From there, I'd only show a single question at a time, cycling through to a new question after they answer, so it feels less like a formal exam. I'd also try to limit the options to 2 or 3 choices as to keep things simple for people.
Thank you, that's really useful to hear! I definitely agree that there needs to be a call to action. That totally just slipped my mind.
I definitely value your feedback that you find it intimidating, but I suspect that poker players won't feel the same way, so I'd like to get some more data points before adjusting, but that's not to say that I don't value your data point.
I thought about cycling through questions. The issue I have with that is that I want users to be able to scan the list of questions, because it gives them a feel for what the app does, and maybe question 7 piques their interest, but they wouldn't have taken the time to cycle through all the way to question 7. Of course, that's just one trade off, so ultimately I want to hear what more people think.
Overall as a landing page it's not that great let me provide some constructive feedback starting from the top of the page:
You need to look at better examples of landing pages. Here's some links that should help:
https://saascss.com/
https://www.landinglion.com/guides/landing-pages-101/best-practices/
Hope that helps and keep on hacking on this you've clearly spent some time getting this all to work.
Lots of good info, thank you!