Hi all! I have been inspired by the landing page feedback community and decided it is an area which would be improved. It is often a section that gets either 0 comments, or too many, and typically a lot of contradicting comments.
So, I figured maybe a system that gives individuals a bit of credibility/weight behind their feedback, as well as a way to "follow up" with feedback given/recieved would be helpful, but I wonder what you indies think of this?
Also, whilst I am here I would be a hypocrite if I did not ask for some feedback on my super simple MVP beta sign up landing page. heeed.co
Is the messaging clear?
Are there any bugs?
Is the content/wording a little confusing?
Maybe someone can help me make catchier headlines/talking points?
Hi, your landing page is Nice it explains what problem you're solving in few lines . However you need to change something.You have placed your roadmap link beneath the subscribe button (email ) and this is another call to action .
Try to simply change this in order to increase your chance to have suscriber.
Hi @newletsgetit !
Thank you for your reply, you are absolutely right! It was silly of me to put a CTA under a primary CTA that will take users away from signing up!!
thank you! :)
You're welcome.
Also, I forget it but since you are talking about the catchier headline you could improve something in that direction.
You have put this as your Last headline :
Reputation to help build relationship
I think you should enhance it, first add a verb to show what users earn (for example earn reputation to help build relationships)
You have forgotten a( u) in the world valuable(valuable members of) in the last paragraph
Yeah catchy headlines are really something I struggle with, as is spelling apparently! haha.
I shall go through and spellcheck everything, as well as think of a better headline for that section :)
OK cool, Good Luck if you want another feedback send me an email.