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Would Love Feedback on New Landing Page

I received a lot of feedback about Dynomantle and it was unanimous that I needed to improve the landing page.

I added some more content about how Dynomantle can be useful and differentiates itself from other note taking apps. I also added screenshots of the app instead of just using more illustrations.

on December 3, 2020
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    Hi Beekey,
    I've taken a look at your landing page and I have some feedback for you based on my impressions of it.

    • I think the Sign Up button needs to be centered in line with the text above it.
    • Have you tried adding a sticky nav bar to the website? It might help boost conversions, since the Signup and Login buttons are always at the top of the screen and users would be more likely to click on them.
    • You could add the Signup button to the navigation bar also, and make it look like a button rather than a link so that it stands out from the other links in the nav bar.
    • Also, some scroll effects would be cool! As the user scrolls down through the page, you could have the content appear with animations. The AOS library is great for this, if you haven't seen it already, I'd recommend it!
    • It's great to see the Call-to-Action at the end of the page, that'll definitely help conversions!
    • I love the screenshots you've added along with the text. The screenshots are great, and really help me see what the product is like before using it.

    I hope my feedback is useful, and let me know if you want any other feedback on anything else, always happy to help :-)

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      Thanks for the feedback! The signup button placement is very noticeable now that you mention it...

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        No problem! The overall landing looks great, I must say! And I saw you centered the Sign Up button too, nice! Wishing you continued success with Dynomantle :-)

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    • Your Hero is too empty in my opinion, the text is way too small
    • Images are too small
    • When I saw "Your Personal Information Manager" I was :"so it's some sort of AI calendar?"
      And then, I was like "Ho, so it's a notion like web app?"
    • Would be probably cool to add a live demo that don't require to register, something 'instant fun' to test your product!
    • Login page is 404 page
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      I am glad that the feedback I receive is often consistent! Definitely helps a lot so I appreciate you taking the time to provide feedback. I just tweaked the hero content.

      Broken login link is also embarrassing, my build script had a silent failure.

      I've actually done live demos of apps before. The way I design apps makes it relatively low effort. The issue is that the results were not very impressive when I did it with my previous apps. Have you seen one where you thought it worked well?

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    Here’s my free-flow of thoughts in no order of significance as I navigate through your landing page (on an iPad):

    1. What’s up with the width of the content on the page? Everything looks super small to me.
    2. “Your personal information manager” sounds super vague to me. I have no clue what your product is from this statement, and the description doesn’t really help with this. It sounded to me like a bookmark app or something but I’m not sure.
    3. Oh, it’s a notebook! Oh, wait - it IS a bookmark tracker! Oh, is this Evernote?
    4. By the end, I feel like this is a way for me to take notes on bookmarks that I want to save. Or maybe a way to keep track of sources while I’m writing a paper. Still not too sure.

    So, screenshots of the app kind of helped me to grasp an understanding of what your product is, but it I am still quite unclear. I would actually take a look at Evernote’s landing page. Look how it is clear what action they want you to take, and they give you all of the relevant information that you need to make a decision - all before the page break. Work as much as you can to emulate your competitors - that’s the best way to know what can be successful and what can’t!

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      This is great feedback! I use the term personal information manager because that's what it is to me and the umbrella term for email, note taking, files, etc. But I see how vague it is and what matters is what it means to people who come to the page. Focusing on use cases before the page break is definitely a good idea.

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    I would update the base font-size to 18px

    an update some copywriting on the hero to

    # Improve your knowledge and never loose your bookmarks
    
    I love reading books because you can takes notes aside.
    
    With Dynonamtle you can do the same with your bookmarks.
    
    Find what matters to you at any time.
    
    Button > Start collecting bookmarks
    
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      Thanks for the suggestion!