I received a lot of feedback about Dynomantle and it was unanimous that I needed to improve the landing page.
I added some more content about how Dynomantle can be useful and differentiates itself from other note taking apps. I also added screenshots of the app instead of just using more illustrations.
Hi Beekey,
I've taken a look at your landing page and I have some feedback for you based on my impressions of it.
I hope my feedback is useful, and let me know if you want any other feedback on anything else, always happy to help :-)
Thanks for the feedback! The signup button placement is very noticeable now that you mention it...
No problem! The overall landing looks great, I must say! And I saw you centered the Sign Up button too, nice! Wishing you continued success with Dynomantle :-)
And then, I was like "Ho, so it's a notion like web app?"
I am glad that the feedback I receive is often consistent! Definitely helps a lot so I appreciate you taking the time to provide feedback. I just tweaked the hero content.
Broken login link is also embarrassing, my build script had a silent failure.
I've actually done live demos of apps before. The way I design apps makes it relatively low effort. The issue is that the results were not very impressive when I did it with my previous apps. Have you seen one where you thought it worked well?
Here’s my free-flow of thoughts in no order of significance as I navigate through your landing page (on an iPad):
So, screenshots of the app kind of helped me to grasp an understanding of what your product is, but it I am still quite unclear. I would actually take a look at Evernote’s landing page. Look how it is clear what action they want you to take, and they give you all of the relevant information that you need to make a decision - all before the page break. Work as much as you can to emulate your competitors - that’s the best way to know what can be successful and what can’t!
This is great feedback! I use the term personal information manager because that's what it is to me and the umbrella term for email, note taking, files, etc. But I see how vague it is and what matters is what it means to people who come to the page. Focusing on use cases before the page break is definitely a good idea.
I would update the base font-size to 18px
an update some copywriting on the hero to
Thanks for the suggestion!