Would YOU convert? ;)

I wouldn't. Way too hard to read for me to have spent the time reading 'what we do for you'. All the top stuff is just marketing guff.

• As a business owner -- if I was seeking either website and web application monitoring... then I want to see what you do well, different from all the other monitoring services.
• I would want to see evidence at how savvy your tool works, as compared to others. This space is saturated as so business owners seek trusted platforms, savvy/1-click style solutions.
• Especially as there are open source options in this market
• I tried to read the section under "What we do for you' but it is difficult. The icons (that do not mean a thing to me) are distracting. They are too block like and take. my focus while trying to read the words.
• There are 9 points in the "what we do for you" and human brain typically forgotten the first one by they time they reach 9. 7 points ideal, 3 even better.
• The LP is showing no evidence that you are able to think from a business perspective. Businesses only spend money on monitoring services to manage the risk. Mitigate loss of customer's, prospect's. Why would a business use. your services if it does not seem you get the business risk they are trying to manage
• Dashboards are the best way to manage risk. Customisable dashboards, and ability to set 1-click alerts on either any parameters or if not available a set of parameters.
• I would redraft and think from a business perspective. You get 32sec all the time, and 2 min some of the time. I would use it wisely. The current LP ignores the basic well known understanding of UX (human interaction focus).
• As for the superheros. The risk of website / web app is not such a high risk like tsuanmi or something. I would definitely want a superhero to the rescue in any life-threatening danger. Bit far fetched (aka marketing gimmick) for a web app/website.

I watched the video for 15 seconds and I totally got it.
It's not for me, but I would consider it as an option because you stand out :)

need some testimonials now :)

My 2 cents. I too find that there is too much info on the landing page. It seems that most of that info should be on the "all features" page or something.

As a developer, it's actually very useful to have all the features listed. But a business owner probably does not understand most of the technical things there.

I would press on some pain points. I tried to come up with some, but it's actually pretty hard.

• Losing actual sales
• Losing leads
• Marketing efforts (if running ads) are wasted if the page is down.
• Brand well-being (bad if the website not working). Always look good.

Maybe have a diffrent landingpage for diffrent audience?

Superhero/Marvel vibes are not for me so I can't connect much with the concept. I get the idea, but not to my taste.

I left some ideas on how to improve the page - https://visualdebug.com/show/supermonitoring.com

Not me. Kept feeling annoyed I wasn't at the form yet as I scrolled.

• Give me three benefits (not features) under the hero image and then bang the form in.
  The absolute top benefits they get from using all those features.
• Then 'what do you get' features - but bulleted, super tight text, no fancy icons, right next to the form. Less than 9. Just the main ones.
• After that, it's just convincer stuff to keep them on page. Definitely need to shift the 'our customers' stuff to the bottom, well below the form.

It's kinda risky to put headline and summary text in an image too (and those need some benefits too). And the try for free button in the header image prob would do better in the top right hand corner. It's hard to see where it is.

Maybe look at the language too (which hints at the perspective you're seeing it from). Move from 'what WE do for YOU' to 'what YOU get'. You're not conferring some kind of honor on them. They're going to compare your service elsewhere. Focus on what the customer wants. Like, you buy a product or service because it benefits you in a specific way. Probably quite a narrow margin of benefit. Then you're super happy when you realise it comes with a bunch of extra stuff.

I wouldn't.

1. I get distracted by the super-hero theme, personally I just want info, not something that might seem like a joke/parody.
2. The "our customers" section looks fake, I doubt those companies are actually customers:

3. I don't see a piercing button/section. If I don't know the price, I won't sign up.