Uf, this was crazy! So much feedback and refactoring needed. I announced my new landing page and received incredibly valuable feedback: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/web3-blockchain-ebook-mvp-landing-page-23bf3b4c48
Special thanks to: https://www.indiehackers.com/DJNSoftware
I also created a Paper document and shared it with my friends.
Apparently I forgot about the most important thing: Advantages of blockchain technology. https://ibb.co/rfmzv1Z
Thanks Bogdan, Miguel, Jose and others!
Biggest learning? It doesn't matter how much time u spend on a page, after you show it to the public and potential TA, a lot changes.
It seems like building in public is extremely valuable already!